From 401ae93fe5cb6a121d40e4a2c6c140646fc12fac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lifning <>
Date: Thu, 20 Jan 2022 01:54:21 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] rewordings

---
 BBHL.txt | 24 +++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/BBHL.txt b/BBHL.txt
index 625de7f..2fbb03e 100644
--- a/BBHL.txt
+++ b/BBHL.txt
@@ -15,24 +15,25 @@ abide by the terms of BIG BILL HELL'S LICENSE:
  1. BAD TERMS
 --------------
 
-If you think you're going to find a permissive license at BIG BILL'S, you can
+If you think you're going to find permissive terms in BIG BILL'S, you can
 kiss my ASS.  It's our belief that you're such a stupid motherfucker that
-you'll modify this bullshit, guaranteed.  If you make a derivative work:
+you'll depend on this bullshit, guaranteed.  If you make a derivative work:
 Shove it up your ugly ASS.  You heard us right: Shove it up your ugly ASS. 
 
 --------------------------
  2. CODE THAT BREAKS DOWN
 --------------------------
 
-Bring your CHANGE; bring your REPRO, bring your SPOUSE--we'll fuck them!
-That's right, we'll fuck your SPOUSE!  Because under the terms of BBHL, you're
-fucked six ways from Sunday!
+Bring your CHANGE; bring your REPRO; bring your SPOUSE--we'll fuck them!
+That's right, we'll fuck your SPOUSE.  Because under BIG BILL HELL'S LICENSE,
+you're fucked six ways from Sunday.
 
 ------------
  3. THIEVES
 ------------
 
-Make a hack under BIG BILL HELL'S, home of CHALLENGE GITTING. That's right:
+Make a hack under BIG BILL HELL'S LICENSE, home of CHALLENGE GITTING.
+That's right:
 
  3.a. CHALLENGE GITTING
  ----------------------
@@ -40,9 +41,10 @@ Make a hack under BIG BILL HELL'S, home of CHALLENGE GITTING. That's right:
  and not need feedback, you get no Contribitor License Agreement.
 
 
-DON'T WAIT; DON'T DELAY; DON'T FUCK WITH US, OR WE'LL RIP YOUR NUTS OFF.
-HURRY UP, ASSHOLE, THIS LICENSE TAKES EFFECT THE MINUTE YOU WRITE A LINE OF CODE
-AND IT BETTER NOT BE PROPRIETARY OR YOU'RE A DEAD MOTHERFUCKER.  GO TO HELL.
+DON'T SELL; DON'T DISTRIBUTE; DON'T FORK FROM US, OR WE'LL RIP YOUR NUTS OFF.
 
-BIG BILL HELL'S LICENSE: OPEN-SOURCE'S FILTHIEST AND EXCLUSIVE HOME OF THE
-MEANEST (SONS OF) BITCHES IN THE COMMUNITY, GUARANTEED.
+HURRY UP, ASSHOLE, THIS LICENSE TAKES EFFECT THE MINUTE YOU WRITE A LINE OF
+CODE, AND IT BETTER BE NON-COMMERCIAL, OR YOU'RE A DEAD MOTHERFUCKER.
+
+GO TO HELL.  BIG BILL HELL'S LICENSE: OPEN-SOURCE'S FILTHIEST AND EXCLUSIVE
+HOME OF THE MEANEST (SONS OF) BITCHES IN THE COMMUNITY, GUARANTEED.